4.Revising-second+draft

@4.Revising-second draft
**a)** Read another group’s first draft of their review and discuss with your own group the following questions:
 * 3rd week **

**Evaluation questions** -What is the name of the film? -What is the genre of the film? (Comedy, adventure…..) -Who are the prominent actors and how well do they act? -Is an overview of the plot given? -What is the theme of the film? -Are there any special effects? -Does the film have its own music? Is it nice? -What about the setting? Where does the film take place? -Does the review leave the audience in suspense without revealing the end? -Is there a logical connection between events and ideas? -Is paragraphing appropriate? -Are there any points the reader may not understand? -What about style, tone and language (are they appropriate?)

**b)**Now look at your draft and ask yourselves the same questions about it. Make any necessary changes and write a second draft in about 120 words.

__Reminder__: Don’t forget that this review will be a recommendation for the whole school’s students and you have to be persuasive if you like them to see the film of your choice!


 * Press ‘5.Editing’ to go on. **